Rec: Innocence by Danse Macabre
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Title: Innocence
Author: Danse Macabre
Genre: Romance, Humor, Alternate Universe
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After an unusual accident the team get a whole new perspective on Jack.
Status: Work In Progress
Length: 24 Chapters so far
Warnings: None really
Comment or Excerpt from fic: So during a weevil-hunt with Ianto, Jack loses his memory. I really like how Jack is described as very innocent-looking and child-like. :P Though he's still a pervert who likes to feel up people, but I love it how he's so innocent while doing it and acting like a kid who just has to touch everything. Few grammar mistakes here and there but it doesn't take out how enjoyable it is.
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Jack didn’t know what to do. He sat quietly. Ianto had asked him very nicely, not like Owen who had shouted at him. Jack wanted to behave; he wondered if they really liked him, all these people that knew him. All they seemed to do was shout at each other. It scared him, especially since they didn’t seem to know what they wanted to do with him,
He moved the chair, turning to the desk. Glancing over his shoulder he saw the four of them involved in an argument. So carefully, he put up a hand and put his finger against one of the pieces of paper on his desk. He moved it to one side, taking it out of the folder and he looked down at it. There was a symbol on the top and then a huge amount of black scrawls. Jack looked at them, he didn’t understand them. It was his room, his office, where he worked and he didn’t understand a single thing around him.
Author: Danse Macabre
Genre: Romance, Humor, Alternate Universe
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After an unusual accident the team get a whole new perspective on Jack.
Status: Work In Progress
Length: 24 Chapters so far
Warnings: None really
Comment or Excerpt from fic: So during a weevil-hunt with Ianto, Jack loses his memory. I really like how Jack is described as very innocent-looking and child-like. :P Though he's still a pervert who likes to feel up people, but I love it how he's so innocent while doing it and acting like a kid who just has to touch everything. Few grammar mistakes here and there but it doesn't take out how enjoyable it is.
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Jack didn’t know what to do. He sat quietly. Ianto had asked him very nicely, not like Owen who had shouted at him. Jack wanted to behave; he wondered if they really liked him, all these people that knew him. All they seemed to do was shout at each other. It scared him, especially since they didn’t seem to know what they wanted to do with him,
He moved the chair, turning to the desk. Glancing over his shoulder he saw the four of them involved in an argument. So carefully, he put up a hand and put his finger against one of the pieces of paper on his desk. He moved it to one side, taking it out of the folder and he looked down at it. There was a symbol on the top and then a huge amount of black scrawls. Jack looked at them, he didn’t understand them. It was his room, his office, where he worked and he didn’t understand a single thing around him.